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So now we have the second “exclusive” chapter from Mike Philbin’s new novel.  I expect that we will soon have the third, fourth, fifth, ad nauseam “exclusive” chapters to follow.

Trite, stupid, shallow.

Although it is written in first person, there is no feeling of connection with the character.  There is no emotional reaction from the protagonist.  It is very under written.  The visuals don’t click.  The story is constantly interrupted for meaningless joe-explainerisms that cause a disconnect from what little flow there is.

Badly written, Mikakke.  Comprende?

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